(Disclaimer: I am not a feeling type person. I am strictly a thinking type. I don't have any idea the impact this will be having on another human being. Mainly because of the reason I cannot feel an artwork. I can think and judge. Probably like the machine.)
Ok. Which one I like the most?
I think it is the second one. But it is a kind of imperfect. The font is off. The grading below is off. There is no transition of light to dark. It seems like a complete disaster. But as the main theme which is going on in this scene is disaster. Especially with explosions, I think you cannot be too perfect. If the text is more pronounced in the first one it will be better. To do that you need to burn(tool in photoshop) the explosion behind it which will affect the light to dark gradient which is working the way up to the top of the frame. But the first one appears lifeless actually. The font also seems like a problem in here. It is invisible in the explosion.
The second one is more creative, but imperfect.
The first one is perfect, but lifeless.
What can be done to improvise on the first image?
Adding a little bit of blood stains (which is not a blood stain. It was a creative choice, God knows what) will help to maintain the drama. Adding a drop shadow on the font. Its an old trick but will do. That's it. Winding this thing then
Will post the revised version soon. See you with another blog post
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